Being in Love
When I loved
I felt I could buy the sun, a dozen a dime,
I possessed the earth, and I was the king of time.
When I loved
I was faster than light, invisible to the eye
I was the expressing poet, everyone was so shy
When I loved
the water was staying on my palm so longer,
grass grown on my tongue stronger and stronger.
when I loved
the breeze ran barefoot toward me,
Oscillating my world, only between me and she.
When I loved,
I shared my wisdom, the preacher of good,
Romance everywhere, stone, water, wood.
When I loved,
Edifice of hope was built in indolence,
And I was reconciled to fate - Condolence.
But, being in love was emotion so delicate,
Hobbling spirits, still ready to relegate.
When I will love,
I will buy the sun, a dozen a dime,
I will possess the earth, and I will be the king of time.
The spirit of being in Love....
I felt I could buy the sun, a dozen a dime,
I possessed the earth, and I was the king of time.
When I loved
I was faster than light, invisible to the eye
I was the expressing poet, everyone was so shy
When I loved
the water was staying on my palm so longer,
grass grown on my tongue stronger and stronger.
when I loved
the breeze ran barefoot toward me,
Oscillating my world, only between me and she.
When I loved,
I shared my wisdom, the preacher of good,
Romance everywhere, stone, water, wood.
When I loved,
Edifice of hope was built in indolence,
And I was reconciled to fate - Condolence.
But, being in love was emotion so delicate,
Hobbling spirits, still ready to relegate.
When I will love,
I will buy the sun, a dozen a dime,
I will possess the earth, and I will be the king of time.
The spirit of being in Love....
Amazing...!!! "Being in Love" shares true feeling of the writer, "Raj". I would like to give my best wishes to him.
ReplyDeleteReally Appreciated, you know what i can have dare to call you like a man not man but excellent and intellegent man... God Bless You dearest buddy...!!!
ReplyDeleteThis is a Amazing feelings of Love. Raj its really very beautiful poem dear. Keep it up. All the best !!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletehi.. nice poem... its cute...
ReplyDeleteSiR KeeP it up...... Dam nice......
ReplyDeleteIt is very good what you wrote so never left your hobby please carry on. VIJAY
ReplyDeletemarvelous poem that i have ever come ac crossed since my k.g to MBA, you have been to epitome of writing i guess
ReplyDeletekeep it up
and Mesmerize us with your beautiful thoughts.
Cool, Raj. I knew you can do this. Please keep writing. All the best.
ReplyDeleteWell...after reading this poem i would like to fall in love with the writer.."Raj" Can i??? Superb BOSS..I hope that you will write something about your best friends..some best parts of ur lyf...waiting for the same..keep it up..MY WRITER FRIEND..
ReplyDeleteThis cud be called a ghazal in english with a stark end...worth reading again and again!!!
ReplyDeleteamazing feellings for love you have
ReplyDeleteBut when I will love
I will possess every drop of rain,
no more frustration and cruel pain.
I will possess every dew drop on leaf,
enjoying his company without wasting even jiff.
I will demise my self as devotee of love.
so wonderful feeling falling in love.